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        I have 5 things I am thankful for. First, I am thankful for my mom and dad. I am thankful for them because they will always be there for me. Thankful because they work hard for me do i can get a educating. Second, thankful for my family too. Come to see us and spend time whit use. Third thankful for food. That i have something to eat because not that many people have money to buy a food. I am thankful for this 5 things.

           
































































































 eIt was a beautiful day. It was christmas eve. The date was December 24,2016.  I was home by my self. My mom always left  the presents in the closet of her room. First, I went to her room and looked for my christmas  gift and I found it on top of a shelf. Next, I  it slowly and  I heard the door clang so I knew she was home i rip it and I ran to my room. I left her room door open.Then she walked into my room and asked if i had gone into her room and went into the closet I said "no." In conclusion, I don't want to look at my christmas  present agin it takes all the fun away from opening it on christmas.

                                      




















































     First,there is a difference between middle school and elementary school. In the first place, Gym in middle school is difference then gym in elementary school. You get changed and you  bring your own clothes. In elementary school kids have to play in the same clothes you wore the whole day. In the next place, in middle school kids have a schedule. You go to difference classes. You spend 45 minutes in one class in elementary stay in one class all day. kids have 5 minutes to get to your class and your not white the same people all day.Another example, Is locker kids have locker to put your stuff that you bring from home and you put it in a locker that they picked for you. You don't have a locker in elementary you put your stuff in the back of the room white everybody els backpack.Finally, I think that middle school is hared then elementary school.



2 comments:

  1. Kevin, I am so glad to see that you are appreciative. I think if you re-read this aloud you will be able to self-correct. Mrs. Dowd

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  2. Good explanations. You can continue to fix the grammatical errors.

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