Confession
My sister and I went to Dollar Tree and bought some fake boxes to put under our tree. Christmas was around the Conner and I still did not know what to give my parents for the perfect Christmas presents so I thought of something very naughty. After I bought the boxes I went to buy some stuff to put inside the presents I bought some candy and bears to put in the boxes as a gift. when in Christmas eve i was getting excited that it was here because be fake. when Christmas was around the Conner and I still did not know what to give to my parents and I forgot one thing that I forgot to buy my sister a present so I went to dollar tree again and then and brought more fake gifts. so Christmas was here so then they started to open there presents and then it was my turn to give my presents and they open it and they were really mad. so Christmas was over I feel a little bit guilty of what I did so I went to buy some other stuff so I can say sorry. At the end Christmas was not best but it was still funny. The day before that i had to say sorry to the present that I did so Christmas was not a good year for me and I hope next Christmas will be a good or a better day for all of us in the family and no more lying because Christmas is a day to be with the family that you love the most and for the people that you have not even seen before some come from other states for countries that they can see you. Christmas was OK I hope that next Christmas will not be as bad as i missed up with this one and when I do a other mistake like when i did with the Christmas presents it will not be the same as every year with your friends and family and other people that come from other place in the world that spend
their time to come and visit you to be with you and they can so much about you and they really must care about so why bring them down in a important to as Christmas to be with the one that you love the most and make a big show about something so not cool that I have did something like that. At the end christmas was a bummer and i will never
The mall Is a fun place to be when you want to be with your friends and family and there are so many places you can go such as Nike and Adidas and other stores you can find In the mall with your friends and family.The first thing you will find when you go into the mall is the food courts and place you can hang out and talk with your friends,and family and there are so many stores that you will not even know to which one you are going first ,you have so many chooses.Second reason that you can find in the mall are touch screens the screen helps you find the store that you have been looking for in the whole mall also you can find them inside the stores to help you find the location and where you have to walk which direction you have to go and where the store is.The third reason is that the bathrooms are dirty and they are messy in them and they also sometimes do not even clean the bathrooms they wait until a week has past or maybe more and that is when they start to clean the bathrooms in the mall.In conclusion these are the reasons why I DON'T like the mall.
Great job, Melanie! Please use one space after commas and two spaces after periods. The SIM format is wonderful. Mrs. Dowd
ReplyDeleteI agree with u because the bathrooms and dirty.
ReplyDeletei love the mall, but i feel the same way you to.
ReplyDeleteGood job!!!!!!!!!
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